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Post by MsWizard Tue Jun 16, 2009 5:27 pm

I was sent an invitation and decided to accept. My name is Alicia, I write poetry. I have a difficult time with these introductions, so generally, this is my "bio" introducing myself~

I am a child, I am a woman
I wonder where my life path will lead me, and how I will get there
I hear music as I watch traffic jams in the street
I see my son as he is born on a mist of sea foam
I want to love so deep that I am lost at sea
I am a child, I am a woman

I pretend to be a grownup as I play in my mind
I feel like warmed soft silk when I am touched in passion and desire
I touch my sons’ cheek and I am lost in a cloud of contentment
I worry that I will never be in love again and will walk this earth alone,
I cry when I realize that I can’t write my own life script, it will all be ad-libbed
I am a child, I am a woman

I understand that you cannot change others; they will be who they are
I say fight for what you know in your heart is right even if you go down in flames
I dream of lying in contentment in the arms of my man, my hot passions soothed in the cooling waves of love
I try to be kind and see the best in others and am sorrowful when I cannot
I hope to touch someone’s life in a meaningful way and that they will remember me
I am a child, I am a woman

I am Alicia
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Post by ebyss Tue Jun 16, 2009 5:32 pm

Welcome Alicia.

I am looking forward to seeing some of your work.

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Post by Garmar Tue Jun 16, 2009 5:50 pm

Hi, Alicia!

Welcome to CWRG.

Thank you for joining our community. We are a group of writers with a common goal--to
become better at our craft. In order to maintain a creative, positive atmosphere we have some easily followed, common sense guidelines for membership. You can review them in our New Member Orientation.

You'll find that everyone here is friendly and helpful, so jump in and start posting!

If you have any questions or issues that aren't covered in the New Member Orientation, please feel free to contact me.

Have fun.

Gary.
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Post by Lady Goodman Tue Jun 16, 2009 6:46 pm

Hello, hello!
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Post by willow Wed Jun 17, 2009 6:04 am

Welcome aboard! smiling
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Post by NaClshaker Wed Jun 17, 2009 1:21 pm

Hi Alicia. I'm Dean and I couldn't write poetry if my life depended on it, and I am impressed with people who produce such elegant language. Welcome to the forum.
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Post by Guest Wed Jun 24, 2009 6:00 am

Wecome.
Some one understands scansion and rhythm is always an asset to any kind of writing. It's very under used in prose. Looking forward to working with you!

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