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Post by Jack on Sat Mar 07, 2009 10:12 am

Memory Blank





INT. JACK'S BEDROOM - MORNING

JACK wakes up with a slight headache.

JACK
Where am I? Who am I?

Jack's father enters his bedroom.

FATHER
Hey Jack! Your up.

JACK
I can't remember anything, can you help me?

FATHER
I am your father named BRUCE. Do you remember me now?

JACK
Nope...

BRUCE
Well... you have two younger brothers named JOHN

and BRIAN. You also have a dog named SHADOW and
your favorite color is red.

JACK
Nope its not ringing any bells. Can you please describe me?

BRUCE
I'd say your nice, friendly, supportive and loves to

help out people.

JACK
Ok...

Jack pauses for a moment; tries to regain his memory.

JACK
(Continued)
I don't know what your talking about Bruce.

BRUCE
I'm your father Jack!

JACK
Sorry 'Dad'. I don't whats going on with me; I need a hospital.

BRUCE
No you don't! Just try to at least remember yourself...

JACK
But I can't

BRUCE
Um... you don't like pollution; you try to avoid it at

all costs. You love forums; in fact, you're starting to
spend more time with the review group forum.

Bruce hands over his artworks and pictures of him

JACK
Hey! is that me?

BRUCE
Yes Jack, it's you... you'd always loved to bake cakes

with your Mom.

JACK
So I was a chief?

BRUCE
(Chuckles)
I guess so; you'd wanted to become a 'chief' when you

were younger. But now you wanted to become a graphics designer.

JACK
Graphics designer? Sounds interesting. Sorry for the

interruption; I have to use the bathroom.

BRUCE
Sure.

Jack spends 10 minutes trying to find the bathroom in his

house; then enters inside and looks at a mirror.

INT. BATHROOM - MORNING

JACK
WOW! I have a nice face. I have black hair with brown

eyes. Some freckles and a nice smile.

Jack searches the bathroom for a scale. Then, hops on it.

JACK
I only weigh 150 pounds?!

When Jack finished looking at himself; he immediately

looks for his dog.

INT. HALLWAY - MORNING

JACK
Hey there... Shadow?

SHADOW
RUF-RUF

JACK
She likes me.

Bruce walks in

BRUCE
Indeed, she does! I'd say that you two have been with

each other for about 13 years.

JACK
Wow! That's a very long time.

After meeting Shadow. Jack walks towards the kitchen and

ate some of Mom's chocolate cake.


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Re: Memory Blank

Post by Garmar on Sat Mar 07, 2009 11:03 am

Great job with this challenge, Jack!

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Re: Memory Blank

Post by MC on Sat Mar 07, 2009 11:21 am

Very creative of you to use your script writing forte for this challenge. I learned a lot about you that I didn't know. That's awesome that you want to be a graphic designer. I had no idea. I'd love to see some of your stuff sometime. That's one of my jobs, btw.

I love how you introduced yourself through this.

Now go bake me a cake! LOL. Wink
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Re: Memory Blank

Post by Jack on Sat Mar 07, 2009 12:10 pm

Thanks Garm! Much appreciated biggrin
I wasen't sure if I've done this correctly... but I have. cheers


MC wrote:Very creative of you to use your script writing forte for this challenge. I learned a lot about you that I didn't know. That's awesome that you want to be a graphic designer. I had no idea. I'd love to see some of your stuff sometime. That's one of my jobs, btw.

I love how you introduced yourself through this.

Now go bake me a cake! LOL.

Hey MC, thanks for all those compliments Laughing . I've read the rules, and you said be as creative as you can; so I did lol.
Indeed, I've incorporated script writing because that's what I like to do. Yes... I'd like to become a graphics designer some day; Perhaps in two years lol.

*Chocolate cake is ready!*
*Passes a piece to Garm and MC*
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Re: Memory Blank

Post by MC on Sat Mar 07, 2009 2:20 pm


*Gobbles cake* mmm...yum. All gone.
Thanks.
Garmar obviously wants more.


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Re: Memory Blank

Post by Garmar on Sat Mar 07, 2009 3:07 pm

That pic is awesome!

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Re: Memory Blank

Post by ebyss on Mon Mar 09, 2009 2:22 pm

LOL!! Nicely done Jack and I love the pic MC.

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